Friday, May 21, 2010

Polka Dot Bikini - New lyrics

"Itsy bitsy teeny weeny yellow polka dot bikini" is a classic example of a song that could have been so much better it the lyricist had only taken time to write more interesting words. The recorded version was just sloppy.

A small change to my lyrics would have created a much stronger visual image in the listener's mind and made the song so much more memorable:

"She wore a Mangalitza, Teeny Weeny,
Curly ginger wool bikini"

What could be better than a bikini made from Mangalitza?

See them here

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